Seeking the poetry in artworks...
Painting: Rafael Saldana ~ Two Waterfalls
Powerful write :D
"a wealth of shadows / by moonlight"...beautifully put...
So much texture in a black and white world,me thinks the shadows and light might be battling forthe soul of the man on that thin line.
the fine line of yesterday.. that is a cool image... love the play of sun and shade here
You packed a lot into a short few verses, enjoyed it; very accurate sense of response to the dynamic striking painting. Is your poem in a particular form, or are the line breaks just your own?
I read a lot of sadness and solitary moments in your piece.
love the pure darkness of this piece... especially "a wealth of shadows by moonlight" where I find peace.
"the fine line of yesterdays"---I like this...it is a fine line indeed!
Shadow nightsof cold gonepast.. Winterschill alonehomealone..wHereColdeST..:)
A winter night.. There in the shadows there is both comfort and something deeper sinister.. Wonderful wordpainting.
Thank you for the finely made match between your words and image. For a brief moment, you left me in the white trudging in the footsteps of that lone figure.
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